Story Board Development

Here is my storyboard for my animation. I feel that I succeeded at exaggerating John Cleese's body language while also keeping it simple and readable to an audience. Since he emphasizes a lot of his words in the dialogue his mannerisms add emphasis to his situation and what he is thinking.
The reason for emphasis comes from the way the dialogue sounds. It is a dry British sense of humor which will be fascinating to incorporate.
I even have learnt how to act out the animation. Really getting into the mind of the character and therefore will allow a more natural and fluid performance.
The one thing I may add is more direction on how his face moves and how that will translate to my model.
To add a story premise the end of the animation will show a mouse with a little suitcase. adding even crueler irony to his statement. "I'm trying to run a hotel here".

Overall I feel it communicates well but may need some tweaking.